Friday, November 6, 2009

Freshman 15

This isn't a finished piece of writing; it's just the skeleton of what I'd do with the "Commonly held assumptions" assignment.

First, the assignment:
Select a commonly-held assumption and present an argument against it.

Notice what's contained (and implied) here:
  • Everyone else (or at least a lot of people) thinks this one is true.
  • Their argument isn't necessarily so.
  • An argument implies that maybe there's some other material that I'm not even bringing out.
Now for my "commonly-held assumption" (against which I'm arguing):
The "Freshman 15" is a bad thing.

Definition work necessary: The "Freshman 15" is the fifteen pounds that a college freshman (not a high school freshman) is alleged to gain during the freshman year.

Where did we get this?
  • Observations of friends, etc., showing that people actually are gaining weight (and some of it is fat).
  • Magazine articles (particularly in magazines aimed at girls?) about avoiding the flab.
  • The "bad thing" part comes from our culture's fascination with the body—whether it's the Abercrombie male with the incredible abs or the fashion magazine girl who weighs 98 pounds, we set up unrealistic goals for ourselves.
Parts of my opponent's argument that might be correct:
  • Many freshmen do eat too much pizza, beer, and other junk food because they are away from parental supervision.
  • Stress causes overeating.
  • Without required gym classes and with a lot of homework, physical exercise is often forgotten.
  • Gaining fat is often a poor idea—and fat gained by young people often stays put for the rest of their lives.
Soft spots in their argument:
  • Freshmen are 18 years old or so, and are still growing. Compare a fit high school basketball player with a fit college player and you'll see more muscle, broader shoulders, and usually more height.
  • The taller boys may put on another inch in height before their sophomore year.
  • Some college students become more active in sports, etc., and gain pounds of muscle.
  • "Normal" is a very tricky word when applied to height/weight.
  • A normally-built woman of 25 or so has a different shape from a normally built woman of 17. Usually the difference is in general shape and (yes) a few moderate fat deposits that give the mature woman a more rounded, less bony appearance. This is not a bad thing (from a health point of view).
  • Considering the amount of stress a college freshman has, perhaps a little comfort food (which is always high-calorie) is a better alternative to depression and/or other ways of dealing with stress.